I've been messing with this mix for the last few days now, and I think I'm to the point where I'm not making it any better, I'm just making it different. So here it is. I'm making it my goal to not touch it again until I put vocals to it, which may be a very long time from now.
I also added a guitar solo. I'm not too sure how I feel about it, but again, I think I'm just going leave it as is. You can listen to that here so that you don't have to listen to the whole song just to hear the added guitar solo.
Time to move on to a new song. Yippie.